Wednesday, February 6, 2013

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 21

Performance enhancing drugs, such as steriods, should not be allowed in sports. The primary reason performance enhancing drugs should not be used is because it can affect your body in a negative way. Professional sport players should start a new tradition that consists of being all natural that will influence all athletes to not use drugs. Some people misuse the drug and should only take them for a short period of time but they take them longer. Overall, performance enhancing drugs are very dangerous and should not be used by anyone

1 comment:

  1. Mary, I like that you used additional additional advanced words in your paragraph, such as "consist." Good job!

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